Though it is one of the faded memories of my life today, there are times when I remember his face cl

One day, Spotty returned from his daily walk with a broken leg. Days passed on and one evening when Spotty returned from his long walk, he appeared very exhausted. He came to my room and sat near me. It was then that I saw his hind leg was injured and was bleeding. I called out my mother and she quickly tied a bandage around his leg and gave him food to eat. I was very upset. But the next day, Spotty was up to his usual pranks though he limped a bit. After this incident my relation with Spotty became more intense. I really admired him a lot for his courage.
Almost a year later, one midnight we heard Spotty barking breathlessly. We came out and saw that he was barking continuously heading somewhere. After some time Spotty became quiet. I patted him on his back and came inside. The next day morning, my heart skipped a beat when I didn't see Spotty. I searched for him in each and every corner but he was nowhere. And this time he had gone and would never come back. I cried and waited for him. We waited for one long week. But there were no signs of him. Then one day my Dad got transferred to Mumbai. We shifted back to Mumbai. What would have happened to Spotty? Would he have died? These were the only questions in my mind, but they all remained unanswered forever.
【解析】
这是一篇读后续写。本文主要描述了作者小时候收养流浪狗“点点”那天的情景。
第一段的开头是：一天，点点从日常散步回来后腿受伤了。所以可以接着写：几天过去了，一天点点回来时，看上去很无力。这时我才发现的它的一条后腿受伤了，而且正在流血。我大声叫妈妈拿绷带过来给它包扎，并给它拿了一些吃的。看着它受伤，我很伤心。可是第二天，点点照样像往常一样和我们玩闹，尽管它的腿还瘸着。从那以后，我更喜欢它了，因为它非常勇敢。第二段的开头是：差不多一年以后，一天午夜我们听到点点撕心裂肺地叫。所以可以接着写：我们赶快出去，看见点点还在朝着一个方向疯狂地叫着。过了一会，它安静了下来。我抚摸着它的背，安慰它。可是，第二天早上我却没有看见点点。我们找遍了附近它常去的地方，都没有发现它。几天过了，还是没有发现点点的踪迹，它就这样消失了，再也没有回来。我希望它仍然在世界的某处快乐的活着。
续写时应注意时态，所写内容要符合逻辑。
【点睛】
范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些高级表达，例如：It was then that I saw his hind leg was injured and was bleeding.中使用了强调句；We came out and saw that he was barking continuously heading somewhere.中that引导宾语从句；But the next day, Spotty was up to his usual pranks though he limped a bit.中though引导让步状语从句。