A monk used to live in a hut at a side of a village. He read books all day long, without worrying fo

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摘要: 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
A monk used to live in a hut at a side of a village. He read books

The monk thought for some time and hesitatingly said, “I don't need anything. But sometimes I wish I had a piece of gold. As you know, I have always been relying on the villagers, without whom I would be starving to death. Naturally, it has long been my desire to do something in return for their favor. All I can do is help educate their children. With no access to proper facilities and books, most of the kids in the village stay uneducated. A piece of gold is all I need to equip them with adequate knowledge so that they can have better chances of a bright future.” Hearing this, the fox nodded and promised she would see to it that the monk could have what he was longing for. With these words, the fox left in no time.
It was now six months since the fox had gone. The more time went by, the more certain the monk felt that she wouldn't come back. One day, however, there was someone knocking at the door. The monk opened it and much to his astonishment, there stood the fox with a piece of gold in her mouth. She looked much skinnier than he last saw her. Deeply moved, the monk hugged the fox tightly with tears in his eyes. It turned out that the fox spent the last half of a year trying to fulfill her promise and she made it.
【解析】
本文属于读后续写。要求根据所给短文内容,结合给出的线索句完成文章续写。
本篇书面表达属于读后续写。通过阅读所给文章可知,本文讲述了一个和尚和一只狐狸的故事。和尚温柔,善良,村民敬佩他的高尚,给他提供食物;狐狸因为寒冷敲开和尚住的小屋,连续几个月在和尚的小屋里不仅享受了温暖,同时受到和尚的款待。在狐狸离开时,狐狸想做一些事给和尚作为回报。
续写部分分为两段,第一段开头是:和尚想了一会儿,犹豫地说,我什么都不需要,但有时候我希望我有一块金子。所以,接下来应该写和尚需要金子的理由和用处:可能会拿这些金子感谢帮助过他的村民;可能会用这些金子买一些用于读书的设备,教村里孩子识字。第二段开头是:狐狸已经走了六个月了。本段接下来应该描写和尚对之前狐狸所说的话开始怀疑,同时可以写狐狸返回后的情形。此处应详细描写狐狸讲述这些时间自己干了什么事:通过自己的努力,为和尚换回金子,让自己的身体比之前瘦了好多,和尚对此情景很感动。
续写内容应符合逻辑,本篇主要以一般过去时为主。
【点睛】
文章续写内容,语义丰富;和原文在结构上保持了一致,句式简繁结合,充分表明了写作者的语言驾驭能力。文章中的高分句型如下:运用了with的符合结构:With no access to proper facilities and books, most of the kids in the village stay uneducated. 使用了定语从句:A piece of gold is all I need to equip them with adequate knowledge            so that they can have better chances of a bright future.”使用了现在分词做状语: Hearing this, the fox nodded and promised she would see to it that the monk could have what he was longing for.
 
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