In the beginning of years, when the world was so new and the Animals were just beginning to work for

“Well,” said the Horse, “there’s a thing that has done nothing since Monday morning.  He won’t run.”“Oh!” said the Djinn, whistling, “that’s my Camel. He should be most powerful among all of you. Didn’t he do most of the job? What does he say about it?”“No, not at all. He only says ‘Humph!’” said the Dog; “and he won’t fetch and carry.”“Very good,” said the Djinn. “I’ll change him if you will kindly wait a minute.”The Djinn walked across the desert, and found the Camel most idle, looking at his own reflection in a pool of water.“My friend,” said the Djinn, “I hear you have done no work, with the world so new-and-all?”
And the Camel said ‘Humph!’ again, but no sooner had he said it than he saw a great big lolloping humph( 驼 峰 ) (we call it 'hump' now, not to hurt his feelings)on his back.“Do you see that?” said the Djinn. “That’s your very own hump that you’ve brought upon your very own self by not working. Today is Thursday, and you’ve done no work since Monday, when the work began. Now you are going to work.”The Camel went away to join the Three. And from that day to this he works silently all the time but always wears a hump.
【解析】
本文是一篇读后续写。
本篇书面表达是读后续写。通过阅读所给文章可知，文章讲述一只在沙漠中无所事事的骆驼。因为骆驼不愿干事情而引起了马，狗和牛的不满。最终掌管沙漠的精灵来了。
续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：“是这样，”马儿说，“有只动物从星期一早上起就没做什么事情。他不会跑。”所以这一段应该写精灵听了所有动物对骆驼的抱怨后找到了骆驼。第二段开头是：骆驼说:“哼!可他刚说完，就看见背上有个巨大的驼峰(我们现在叫它“驼峰”，免得伤了他的感情)。所以这段主要写骆驼收到了惩罚，从此带着驼峰加入其他动物的行列默默的工作。
续写时要求使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语增加了写作难度，我们要熟悉所给划线词语，恰当的时候加以运用。最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右；续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。按要求完成写作任务。
【点睛】
文章思路清晰，语言规范，段落整齐，语篇连贯，层次清晰。使用了较为高级的句式:定语从句：That’s your very own hump that you’ve brought upon your very own self by not working；条件状语从句：I’ll change him if you will kindly wait a minute. 高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次，整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。