I prided myself on being a good neighbor. My husband, Charles, and I knew everyone who lived along o

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摘要: 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一个完整的短文。
I prided myself on being a good neighbor. My husband, Charles, and I knew everyone who li

That was the first brick in the wall between us. On a sunny day, I was bathed in the beautiful sunshine when suddenly the cat jumped on my laps. It seemed to come out of nowhere so my hair almost stood on end. Bouncing up from my chair, I dropped the cat hard on the ground and ran after it. While this was going on, Kelly was just standing on her balcony glaring at me. “That was how you treat my cat?” she shouted. A brick turned into a wall from then on.
One day, when I was walking on that road again,I saw Kelly smiling at me. I smiled back, saying: “I was sorry for the cat the other day!” She admitted the cat was not friendly sometimes and her husband had sent it the “Stray Cats Shelter”. “Our relationship is not that easy to break, isn’t it?” She looked at me in the eye. We burst into laughter immediately and gone was the wall.
【解析】
本篇书面表达是读后续写。
通过阅读所给文章可知,作者和邻居们都相处融洽,但是凯利除外。之前有一段时间,作者和凯利的关系很好,但后来因为一只流浪猫,两人的关系开始交恶。
续写部分分为两段,第一段开头是:那是我们之间墙上的第一块砖。本段应该写在一个阳光明媚的日子里,我沐浴在美丽的阳光下,突然一只猫跳到我的膝盖上。不知从哪里冒出来的,我的头发都竖起来了。我从椅子上跳起来,把猫重重地摔在地上,然后追了过去。当这一切发生的时候,凯利正站在阳台上瞪着我。“你就是这样对待我的猫的?””她喊道。从那时起,一块砖变成了一堵墙。第二段开头是:有一天,当我再次走在那条路上时,我看见凯利对我微笑。本段应该写我笑着回答说:“那天我为猫感到难过!她承认这只猫有时候不太友好,她的丈夫把它送到了“流浪猫收容所”。“我们的关系不那么容易破裂,不是吗?”她看着我的眼睛。我们立刻大笑起来,墙不见了。
续写时要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右;续写的内容要与原文保持一致。
【点睛】
本文描写详略得当,使用了短语和高级句子。如:stand on end,bounce up,run after,from then on,burst into laughter等短语;时间状语从句While this was going on, Kelly was just standing on her balcony glaring at me.非谓语结构Bouncing up from my chair, I dropped the cat hard on the ground and ran after it.等高级句式。
 
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