I believe that all humans are similar but we are all blind to this idea due to cultures, religions,

I watched this adolescent girl as she ran carefree towards her teachers and classmates just as I did when I was in elementary school. For some reason I felt as if I had met this girl before, but I knew this was impossible. After she had inspected me, and compared herself to me I could not stop thinking about our interaction. I wondered why this so emotional for me, and then I realized, to our surprise we were amazingly similar. The way this child ran, interacted with her classmates, and was so curious about me, a white stranger, made me recall the experience of my own childhood.
This was an eye-opening experience that changed the way I see people nowadays. What was really fascinating to me was the similarity of the people I met, and all their personalities that were alike every single other person I came in contact with during my trip. That is why out of the 6 billion people in the world, I am constantly curious about how similar we all are, and I have sense that we are all incredibly the same, but we do not see this due to cultures and religions as well as appearances that blind us from understanding my belief. （168 words）
【解析】
本篇书面表达是读后续写。通过阅读所给文章可知，本文讲叙了“我”在完成高二年级的学习后，前往非洲的内罗毕的一段经历。“我”和与自己语言、文化、肤色等截然相反的孩子们相处愉快，尤其是一个小女孩与“我”的接触让我真切地感受到人类的相通与共性。
续写部分分为两段，第一段的开头是我看着这个少女无忧无虑地向老师和同学们跑去，就像我上小学时那样。本段要分析小女孩的行为背后的心理活动，作者感觉到这个小女孩的行为和自己很相似，让我想起我的童年。
第二段首句是这是一次大开眼界的经历，改变了我现在看待人的方式。作者在非洲经历后的反思，我和其他人是如此地相似，然而我们总是被外表比如肤色、国家和文化等蒙蔽了眼睛。
【点睛】
本文的续写层次清晰，要点全面，表达流畅，使用了高级词汇和句子。如： emotional, amazingly, interact with, fascinating，in contact with等高级词汇，宾语从句For some reason I felt as if I had met this girl before, but I knew this was impossible。宾语从句I wondered why this so emotional for me, and then I realized。等高级句式。