运动塑造健康,团结凝聚力量。5月10 日,学校举办了春季运动会。你和班上的许多同学参加了比赛项目,战绩显著。其他同学观看了比赛,并为选手们加油喝彩。

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摘要:   书面表达  运动塑造健康,团结凝聚力量。5月10 日,学校举办了春季运动会。你和班上的许多同学参加了比赛项目,战绩显著。其他同学观看了比赛,并为选手们加油喝彩。请你根据

  书面表达

  运动塑造健康,团结凝聚力量。5月10 日,学校举办了春季运动会。你和班上的许多同学参加了比赛项目,战绩显著。其他同学观看了比赛,并为选手们加油喝彩。请你根据下面四幅图片的提示,写一篇日记,介绍运动会概况及班上同学参加的情况,并抒发自己的活动感受。

  写作要求:

  1.文章中勿出现真实的姓名和校名;

  2.文章须包含图片所提供的主要信息,可适当发挥。行文连贯,条理清晰;

  3.词数80~100个,文章的开头已经给出,不计入总字数。

  参考词汇:teamwork

  Friday, May 11th, 2019 Sunny

  It was sunny yesterday. Our school held a spring sports meet.

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  【解析】

  这是一篇看图作文,根据图片中的相关内容介绍一下运动会概况及班上同学参加的情况,并抒发自己的活动感受。所提供的卡片中列举了跳远、跳高、400米接力和100米接力。主要从同学们的参加情况和自己的活动感受这个方面去写。时态为一般过去时,人称为第一人称。注意日记中必须包含图片上的所有信息,并适当发挥。写作时,避免使用汉语式的英语,尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确,表达要符合英语习惯,注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词,注意上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系,表达具有条理性。

  【答案】

  Friday, May 11th, 2019 Sunny

  It was sunny yesterday. Our school held a spring sports meet. There were 4 events for both boys and girls. They were the long jump, the high jump, the l00-meter race and the 400-meter relay race.

  Everyone in our class felt very excited because we got a wonderful result. Sixteen of us took part in the activity and we got 4 first prizes, 2 second prizes and 3 third prizes. My classmates Yuan Ying and Fang Dan won the girls' long jump and the high jump without difficulty. So did I in the boys'100-meter race. In the boys' relay race, three boys and I ran very fast, coming out on top. In the meantime, all other classmates watched the matches, took photos and cheered us on. From this sports meet, know that sports can keep us healthy. We should do sports every day.

  Meanwhile, teamwork plays an important role in the relay race. As the saying goes, one tree can't make a forest. So it made us learn to help each other in our daily life.

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