Write a review(评论) of the following story in about 120 words. The review has to include the followin

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摘要: Write a review(评论) of the following story in about 120 words. The review has to include the following points.(阅读下面的故事,请根据下面的提示,写出一篇约120词的评论).
(1
Write a review(评论) of the following story in about 120 words. The review has to include the following points.(阅读下面的故事,请根据下面的提示,写出一篇约120词的评论).
(1)The title of your review.(你撰写的评论的标题.)
(2)Your idea(s), examples and the reason(s) for unhappiness and happiness in the story.(你归纳的关于故事中幸福和不幸福的观点,举例子并说明原因.)
(3)Your idea(s) of happiness, examples for happiness in your daily life.(归纳你在日常生活中关于幸福的观点,并举例说明.)
(4)Your conclusion about happiness.(关于幸福的结论.)
(5)The words you may use.(你可能用到的词) be satisfied with(对……满意) desire n.欲望 contentment 知足 the key(关键) to happiness.
A long time ago, in a rich and beautiful country, there lived an unhappy king. He slept badly and didn't feel like eating. He often cried for no reason. This made the queen and his people worried. So they called a doctor to examine him.But he found nothing wrong with his body.He said what the king needed was the shirt of a happy person to wear.That would make him happy.
The prime minister was called to the palace. But when they explained the king's situation to him, he said,"Although I have a lot of power, it doesn't make me happy. I'm always worried about losing my power."
Then the king's banker came to say, I'm afraid I'm not happy either. I have a lot of wealth, but I'm always worried about losing money. Someone tries to steal my money. Next, the palace singer was called to say, "I'm famous but I'm not happy because I'm worried about being followed by others. I can't be free."
Finally, the top general was told to go out to find a happy man. He searched and searched but couldn't find anyone. Everyone seemed to have their own problems, and no one was truly happy. Just as he wanted to give up. he saw a poor man on the street. He was eating with his hands and singing happily to himself. The general went to him and said,"What makes you so happy? You have no power, money, or fame." The man said,"I have everything I want. and I don't want what I can't have. So I'm happy, and my song comes from the happiness in my heart. ""Can you give your shirt to me, I need it, "said the general."What shirt? I don' t have any shirts."answered the man.
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【写作思路】
这是一篇要求写评论的文章,根据下面的故事中的相关信息写出一篇约120词的评论。所提供的材料中列举了撰写的评论的标题。主要从:(1)归纳的关于故事中幸福和不幸福的观点,举例子并说明原因。(2)归纳你在日常生活中关于幸福的观点,并举例说明;(3)关于幸福的结论。这几个方面去介绍。时态为一般过去时,人称为第一人称。注意评论中必须包含材料上的故事情节,并适当发挥。写作时,避免使用汉语式的英语,尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确,表达要符合英语习惯,注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词,注意上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系,表达具有条理性。
【参考范文
My Thoughts about Happiness
Power, wealth, and fame can't always make people happy. For example, the rich people were unhappy, because they are afraid of losing money, while the poor people was truly happy because he was satisfied with what he could have.
What can always make me happy?Happiness is always in my heart and is easy to find if I pay more attention to what I have. For instance, enjoying the beautiful sunshine after a cloudy day, getting a glass of water from mother when I am studying, getting help from my friends when I am in trouble and so on. These are the moments when I am happy.
All in all, don't think about what you can't have. Contentment is the key to happiness.
【名师点评】
(1)高分句型一  For example,the rich people were unhappy, because they are afraid of losing money, while the poor people was truly happy because he was satisfied with what he could have.例如,富人不快乐,因为他们害怕失去钱,而穷人真正快乐是因为他对自己所拥有的感到满足。句子because they are afraid of losing money是由because引导的原因状语从句。
(2)高分句型二  All in all, don’t think about what you can't have. 总之,不要想你不能拥有的东西。句子what you can't have.作think about的宾语。
 
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